My red panda fishbone facts.

Kia ora

This is an activity we did when we were learning how to find facts and put them in the right box on  a fishbone diagram. We are learning how to write a report about an animal which is native to China. We are learning about China at the moment because last week was Chinese language week and one of our classmates, Braeden, is half Chinese. I decided to put a photo of my animal on the background of my fishbone diagram and publish it just like that.

Something I think I have done well  is making sure I got the right facts in the right box.

Next time I think I could improve by writing more notes and fewer sentences. I need to just write down key words not whole sentences when I am making notes.

Ka kite ano

Mt Ruapehu

  Kia ora

This is an activity we did when we were learning how to draw Mt Ruapehu using Google Draw.

Something I think I have done well is putting similes in it but

next time I think I could improve by meeting the deadline.

Ka kite ano

Thank you letter

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This is an activity we did when we were learning how to write a ‘thank you’ letter.

Something I think I have done well  is thinking up good things to say but

next time I think I could improve my capitals and fullstops because my teacher had to give me two tips about them.

Ka kite ano

6 September 2016

Room 9

Ohaeawai Primary

Tennyson Street

Ohaeawai 0472

Dear Mum and Dad

I am writing to thank you very much for letting  me go on the ski trip last week.

I really enjoyed the whole week and skiing was amazing .

I also liked going to the trout place because we got to fly fish.It was my first time fly fishing and

I caught a big trout.It was fun.

My favourite part was going on the chair lift.

I would really love to go skiing again, one day.

Love from

Your daughter Lilly