Learning Journey

Thursday, 14 May 2015

Narrative

                  
Marshmallows
Once upon a time in the dark woods there was a little boy camping. He had built a campfire and he was roasting marshmallows. Then a fat green monster that loved marshmallows came out the water and came sneaking behind the boy. “Greee!! ahaaa!!” yelled the little boy. He held up a stick with a marshmallow on it. The monster looked at the boy with puppy dog eyes. He really wanted the marshmallow. So the boy took the marshmallow off the stick and the monster ate the marshmallow.  Then he threw one up in the air for him.  The monster was so happy.  Snatch! the monster grabbed the last marshmallow from his hand. The boy was shocked. He went to get another one when he realized there were no more left. The monster got mad and started to chase the little boy. Then he saw the pillow so he grabbed the pillow and held it in front of him. Yes, it looked like a marshmallow, he thought.  He chucked the pillow and the monster ran after it. The boy ran away into the woods screaming. The monster was happy. He put the pillow on a stick and held it by the fire but it turned into dust. He felt sad and sat and stared at the moon.

Monday, 11 May 2015

My first Narrative

Wrecked
One day three girls were asleep on the raft when suddenly bang!! ”What was that?” shouted Lilly. Lilly went over to look. It was an island. It was rocky and sandy. “Wake up Taylor and Kate we are on an island,” yelled Lilly. “What are we going to do?” sighed Taylor. “I will go and make a fire to cook dinner,” shouted Kate. Taylor went and caught some fish. And Lilly made a hut with beds. When the fish was cooked they started eating.It was getting dark when they finished the yummy fish so they went to bed.
In the morning Lilly woke up Taylor and Kate. Suddenly a wild beast came charging out of the marshy swamp. “Run!!!” Lilly screamed. They took off to the water's edge where the boat was. But there waiting was a whale. They hopped on its back and the whale took them to another island that was rocky and sandy. The girls lived happily ever after.