My first Narrative

Wrecked

One day three girls were asleep on the raft when suddenly bang!! ”What was that?” shouted Lilly. Lilly went over to look. It was an island. It was rocky and sandy. “Wake up Taylor and Kate we are on an island,” yelled Lilly. “What are we going to do?” sighed Taylor. “I will go and make a fire to cook dinner,” shouted Kate. Taylor went and caught some fish. And Lilly made a hut with beds. When the fish was cooked they started eating.It was getting dark when they finished the yummy fish so they went to bed.

In the morning Lilly woke up Taylor and Kate. Suddenly a wild beast came charging out of the marshy swamp. “Run!!!” Lilly screamed. They took off to the water's edge where the boat was. But there waiting was a whale. They hopped on its back and the whale took them to another island that was rocky and sandy. The girls lived happily ever after.