Learning Journey

Wednesday, 13 April 2016

My Easter recount with muscles, guts and skin.

Here is my Easter recount after I worked with my teacher to make sure it was good enough for publishing. This is what my teacher means when she says my story needs to have muscles, guts and skin. I want you to  notice that I used similes, adjectives, short,sharp sentences and onomatopoeia.


1 comment:

  1. Hi Lilly

    I love all your direct speech.
    From Braeden

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