Writing Challenge

Hi

Today we were given free choice to write anything I pefre to write about animals any kind of animal because it is hard to think of something that the teacher tells us to write about. I also like writing a what am I it is fun to find out facts about animals.







Lilly's Original
                                              
What am I
I am a predator who eats other animal,I am a mammal. I am from Africa. I am the fastest animal on land.

I have big claws , long tail  , spots, furry chest,sharp teeth , big paws , a black nose ,  brown eyes and a yellow browney coat.

I am fast,I leap and I put my paws into the ground to make my speed faster.

                                               What am I

                                            I am a cheetah



Buddy Edit
                                                 What am I?
I am a predator who eats other animal,I am a Mamale. I am from Africa. I am the Fastest animal on land.

I have big claws , long tail  , spots, furry chest,sharp teeth m big paws , a black nose ,  brown eyes and a yellow browney coat.

I am fast,I Leap and I put my paws into the ground to make my Speed faster.

                                               What am I?
                                            I am a Cheetah

The wrong key

Kia Ora,

This term we have been training for cross country. dose your school do cross country? us big kids have to do 2 laps around the track. If we don't do 2 laps we have to run at lunchtime. I have never got less then 2 laps ever. I hope I come something more then last I'm going to start off running and when I get tired I take a little break and I sprint off in front of everybody and I'm going to do it over and over again until we have finished. I enjoy fitness because you get fit and heathey. The learning for cross country is that every time we practice at school I always fell like I can do more than everybody.

To show you our cross country track we went for a walk and videoed it on the I-pad util we got up to the gate that we had to unlock we put the key in then we noticed that we had the wrong key. when we got back we also noticed that half of the video was cut off oh no!!