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Tuesday, 16 August 2016

Writing Challenge

Hi

Today we were given free choice to write anything I pefre to write about animals any kind of animal because it is hard to think of something that the teacher tells us to write about. I also like writing a what am I it is fun to find out facts about animals.







Lilly's Original
                                              
What am I
I am a predator who eats other animal,I am a mammal. I am from Africa. I am the fastest animal on land.

I have big claws , long tail  , spots, furry chest,sharp teeth , big paws , a black nose ,  brown eyes and a yellow browney coat.

I am fast,I leap and I put my paws into the ground to make my speed faster.

                                               What am I

                                            I am a cheetah



Buddy Edit
                                                 What am I?
I am a predator who eats other animal,I am a Mamale. I am from Africa. I am the Fastest animal on land.

I have big claws , long tail  , spots, furry chest,sharp teeth m big paws , a black nose ,  brown eyes and a yellow browney coat.

I am fast,I Leap and I put my paws into the ground to make my Speed faster.

                                               What am I?
                                            I am a Cheetah







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