Writing using similes and metaphors.

We have been learning how to get better scores for vocabulary in our writing by using similes and metaphors. We had to start with a hook and use similes and metaphors. Here is my work.

“Yeppie !!!!! we are finally here at the farm,” I shouted. As we opened the gate, all I heard was animal noises. The cow bellowed as loud as a blow horn. Yay!! I thought. I get to see Winter, my pet sheep. His fur is as white as snow. When he heard my voice he pranced so that he looked like an excited bunny. My mum said, “Is he a little bunny?”

We were going to give him and his friends a new paddock, a fresh green one. When I opened the gate they all ran through. Some sheep jumped and some sheep  just ran. The sheep that ran were fast cheetahs. The sheep that jumped were like kangaroos.

Finally it was lunch time yum!!!.Mum made some scones, cookies, and buns. She had some juice,Milo and fizzy. My mum called me a fat pig cause I ate so much.