Kia ora
This week we are learning about the five senses taste,feel,smell,hear and sight. The whole class did this as a test. To see if we were working properly with their writing groups. I wrote mine about a old ship.Here is my one.
I particularly like your opening line 'The wind was whispering to me that I should enter.' I can hear it in my mind and can imagine what it would be like to be standing next to the ship. I wonder what will happen next?
Hi Lilly,
ReplyDeleteYou wrote a very descriptive paragraph about the ship, it certainly does look abandoned and lonely.
Mrs H
Kia ora Lilly,
ReplyDeleteI particularly like your opening line 'The wind was whispering to me that I should enter.' I can hear it in my mind and can imagine what it would be like to be standing next to the ship. I wonder what will happen next?
Miss M