Marshmallows
Once upon a time in the dark woods there was a little boy camping. He had built a campfire and he was roasting marshmallows. Then a fat green monster that loved marshmallows came out the water and came sneaking behind the boy. “Greee!! ahaaa!!” yelled the little boy. He held up a stick with a marshmallow on it. The monster looked at the boy with puppy dog eyes. He really wanted the marshmallow. So the boy took the marshmallow off the stick and the monster ate the marshmallow. Then he threw one up in the air for him. The monster was so happy. Snatch! the monster grabbed the last marshmallow from his hand. The boy was shocked. He went to get another one when he realized there were no more left. The monster got mad and started to chase the little boy. Then he saw the pillow so he grabbed the pillow and held it in front of him. Yes, it looked like a marshmallow, he thought. He chucked the pillow and the monster ran after it. The boy ran away into the woods screaming. The monster was happy. He put the pillow on a stick and held it by the fire but it turned into dust. He felt sad and sat and stared at the moon.
Kia Ora Lilly,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading your narrative about the little boy and the green monster. I could clearly picture in my head how the boy felt when the monster got mad. It was quick thinking on his part to throw the pillow. I wonder what would have happened if he didn't have the pillow to trick the green monster? Fantastic writing, I predict we'll be seeing more interesting posts from you in the future.